February 13, 2009

Better? 2nd & 3rd Look at the Trail Painting

After my initial sketch of the trail I wanted to go back in and fix many of the things I couldn't get to in the first pass -- so I cleaned up the color, put the light spot behind the trees, silhouetted the jogger  ... is it better?  My next step was to clean up further -- tie some of the larger areas together so it wasn't so many individual moments, but a more cohesive experience.  Better still?  I don't know if I'm done yet, but I'm liking the evolution.

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